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Part I · Foundations
Narration
Narration is not decoration. It is the camera and the conscience of the book.
Narration is the camera and the conscience of the book. It is also one of the most playful craft choices you get. First person can feel like a confession whispered across a table. Close third can feel like standing in someone’s shoes without borrowing their “I.” Omniscient, used with discipline, can soar over a city and then drop into a kitchen argument. Multi-POV can braid several cameras if you keep the handoffs clean.
The test is simple: whose thoughts are we allowed to know, and when? If you answer that inconsistently, readers feel the bump even if they cannot name it. Choose a contract you can sustain for hundreds of pages. Fun voices die when they become exhausting to maintain.
Distance matters. Close narration filters everything through bias, vocabulary, and blind spots. That is a feature. A narrator who hates mornings will describe rain differently than a farmer who needs it. Wider narration can survey an army, but if it knows too much too early, suspense dies of overexplanation.
Reliability is a game you play with the reader. Unreliable narrators need tells: contradictions, omissions, charming justifications, jokes that dodge the bruise. The reader should eventually reconstruct a truer picture. The delight is in the gap between the story told and the story meant.
Scene dramatizes turning points. Summary covers travel, process, and stretches of time. Mixing them on purpose is craft. Defaulting to summary whenever emotions get hard is avoidance. If the fight matters, put us in the room. If the train ride does not, compress it and keep moving.
Write a narration contract for yourself. Name the POV. Name what this mind cannot know. Note the voice: diction, humor, wounds. Mark one place you might tempt a POV breach, and how you will avoid it. Then practice the prompts until the camera feels like a character in its own right.
Worksheet · Narration contract
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Game · Practice prompts
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